please give me your advice

[HoneLynn]

Originally posted by venturi@Mar 2 2005, 03:00 AM
First, welcome to Oprano - the No Bullshit Zone.

Now then...
Oh my.... oh my oh my.......

I truly hope you have thick skin and don't take bluntly honest critisism and advice personally, because that is Exactly what you're going to get here. We don't pull punches, we don't care about your feelings, we frankly don't give 2 shits about you ...
Having said that, I don't think I'm talking out of turn by saying that we'd rather you Learn and do it right instead of cluttering the interweb with crap sites that won't sell squat.

Your "warning page" is a cluster and a horny surfer will never scroll down in their 800x600 browser window to even see your "Enter" button, much less click it.

GIF banners are NOT your friend and in the gallery/freesite world you have only 7 to 15 seconds to grab a surfer's attention to click on a link that *might* make you a sale. Your GIF thingies take longer than that to display.

Your thumbs aren't linked (as mentioned above).

You have ZERO marketing text - the text you have says nothing about what you are trying to promote. What the hell is this?
"Do you want fuck somebody's wife?hehe~~~
No problems! You will fuck them tonight, free !!
Try it for yourself and you'll see what I mean... ..."

So, I clicked on your "Entertainment Cash" banner... it takes me to a SIX (6) page tour for a cyberage site and until you get to the end of the "tour" there isn't even a "Join Now" button. You lost your potential customer 5 pages back.

OK, now I just clicked a different "Entertainment Cash" link and it took me to a completely different sponsor tour and signup thingy.

Sorry, but it just looks to me like you got this grand idea that you could build a web page with FrontPage or DreamWeaver and make big bucks. It doesn't work that way, friend. You need to learn this business FIRST. This is not a lemonade stand on the corner where people will pay you $5/cup because it's "Trump Lemonade".

Are you serious about getting into business? If your answer is Yes and you really mean it then post back on this thread. There are many several resources, including this one, where you can learn the basic ropes and get your feet on solid ground. Right now you are merely treading in quicksand.

"And that's all I have to say about that." - Forrest Gump

I am so turned on right now.