Need criticism on a client site

Client wanted criticism on his site please let me know either way.

http://www.clnetworks.com

[Trev]

Looks great, loads nice and fast for me

what screen rez have to aimed for because I'm 800x600 on a 17" monitor and I had to scroll sideways just a little...

Either way great job



Last edited by Trev at Mar 19 2003, 03:22 PM

[Rox]

Looks pretty good to me... just a few things after a quick glance:



There should be no apostrophe in "Animations"

There are no META tags

The Privacy link goes 404

"As part of 21st Century companies large and small are highly dependent on technology for nearly all business functions" -- doesn't make sense. I'd go with "In the 21st Century" instead.

I'd make the HP link open in a new window

I didn't proof all the text copy; always have someone (or a few someones) go through your text with a fine tooth comb to find any errors.

And I'd make an html text version of this (put it inside NOSCRIPT tags, and it won't show up on the page, but will be spider food):



Of course, please take my critique knowing that I'm not a heavy hitter in the adult industry like most people here -- I'm just a lowly corporate slave who works on mainstream entertainment sites. Though I will admit that I'm considered the go-to gal for SEO tactics, by virtue of being the only person at WB who knew why we were invisible in the SEs (since our site is flash, flash and more flash).



Last edited by Rox at Mar 19 2003, 07:30 AM

Thank you thats great

[Trev]

Originally posted by WHS@Mar 19 2003, 03:49 PM
Thank you thats great

Does that mean "stop the goddam client is reading this" lol

Originally posted by Trev+Mar 19 2003, 11:53 AM-->