Which Trailer is better?

Mike AI · 07-30-2003

http://hirise.biz/alpha/trailer126t1.wmv

http://hirise.biz/alpha/trailer126t2.wmv

cj · 07-30-2003

i prefer the first one, as the theme makes more sense - but the end of the second one is really cool ...

"man these californian girls are easy"

Sword · 07-30-2003

I like the second one better personally. Just my 2 cents.

Nice site concept!

Mike AI · 07-30-2003

That is the problem I am getting.... its hard to choose, what trailers will convert the best. #1 is best for story line, #2 is probably best for action...

I need to get a good balance I guess...

Billy · 07-30-2003

I like # 1

slavdogg · 07-30-2003

i like white chocolate extacy

Anthony · 07-30-2003

I liked them both. The latter definately has more detail, which the surfer might like.

Buff had too miuch fun making it!

Menace · 07-30-2003

#2 - it's more targeted.. Shows more of the girl and action.

#1 should be run on the food network

why the girls gone wild music tho?

Mike AI · 07-30-2003

Quote:

why the girls gone wild music tho?

It is music I bought, and liscensed.... It sounded familiar so I am using it. It is catchy....

Timon · 07-30-2003

If you're doing the reality porn thing you should focus more on the point in the video that shows the transition from shy virgin to a greedy cum slurping whore...

It's that tension of "I am going to fuck you" vs. "No way I would do something like that" what sells memberships on a reality site.

I think that confrontation is missing in your trailers...

Last edited by Timon at Jul 30 2003, 08:44 AM

Mike AI · 07-30-2003

Timon, I agree with you.... but ChatRoomRomeo is more of a, I will tell you what you want to hear, then you fuck me.... in some scenes we have confrontation, others we have the girl being the agressor.

We set up scenes with background on what went online, etc... its hard to sum it all up in a 30-45 second trailer.

So far sales have been pretty solid, 1 in 112 with our traffic, 1 in 248 overall...

I will work on your ideas though.... have to keep on improving!

shawcutie · 07-30-2003

LOL
I like the first trailer. OMG did he say, "the best canoli in california"?
BTW the fruit tart looked damn good!!

Timon · 07-30-2003

BTW The first one is the best IMHO... better build up to the action.

I'd just like to see Buff make the move on her ;-)

BradShaw · 07-30-2003

Shawcutie, stop watching porn!

dantheman · 07-30-2003

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Originally posted by BradShaw@Jul 30 2003, 11:24 AM
Shawcutie, stop watching porn!

brad that might help her get in the "mood"

Mike, I like the 1st one myself. looking forward to seeing you and the crew in a day or so

Last edited by dantheman at Jul 30 2003, 11:33 AM

Billy · 07-30-2003

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Originally posted by shawcutie@Jul 30 2003, 08:59 AM
LOL
I like the first trailer. OMG did he say, "the best canoli in california"?
BTW the fruit tart looked damn good!!

What do you think they took me to California for... to cook !!

shawcutie · 07-30-2003

Babe, I do it all morning while Mr. Shaw is still snoring

DerekM · 07-30-2003

I like Trailer # 2. Anyway you can raise the volume?!?.. she talks too softly and it was hard to hear what she said. Other than that, it was good...

jimmyf · 07-30-2003

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Originally posted by Menace@Jul 30 2003, 05:10 AM
#2 - it's more targeted.. Shows more of the girl and action.

#1 should be run on the food network

why the girls gone wild music tho?

I agree

Turner · 07-30-2003

Mike, number one is the better of the two but I do like the end of the second one...

DAMNMAN · 07-30-2003

Out of these two clips I would have to say #1.

But take the suggestions given so far seriously because the girls build up in #2 and the end of #2 are better than #1 as previously stated.

The guy talkin' in #1 has more impact that's it.

Hell Puppy · 07-30-2003

Just for a quick gut reaction without trying to analyze it, i prefer #2.

Both are good though.

sextoyking · 07-31-2003

Mike,

I like both, but #2 seems to catch me a little more

good job !!

confucy · 07-31-2003

I vote for #1 and the chocolate cream puff with vanilla pudding.

LeeNoga · 08-02-2003

#2

Torone · 08-02-2003

I came here thinkingyou were talking about mobile homes...

07-30-2003	#4
Mike AI Administrator Want to see your own Advertising Here! Join Date: Oct 2002 Posts: 11,618	That is the problem I am getting.... its hard to choose, what trailers will convert the best. #1 is best for story line, #2 is probably best for action... I need to get a good balance I guess... __________________ Make big money on your Domains! Why wait 40 days to get paid with the other guys? Parked.com pays the most for your traffic, and cuts checks twice a month!

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Billy Members Join Date: Oct 2002 Location: New Orleans ! Posts: 1,928	I like # 1 __________________ Did not know what to do with some old domains.. wow Parked made them make a little money : )

07-30-2003	#11
Mike AI Administrator Want to see your own Advertising Here! Join Date: Oct 2002 Posts: 11,618	Timon, I agree with you.... but ChatRoomRomeo is more of a, I will tell you what you want to hear, then you fuck me.... in some scenes we have confrontation, others we have the girl being the agressor. We set up scenes with background on what went online, etc... its hard to sum it all up in a 30-45 second trailer. So far sales have been pretty solid, 1 in 112 with our traffic, 1 in 248 overall... I will work on your ideas though.... have to keep on improving! __________________ Make big money on your Domains! Why wait 40 days to get paid with the other guys? Parked.com pays the most for your traffic, and cuts checks twice a month!

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BradShaw Members Join Date: Jun 2003 Posts: 1,216	Shawcutie, stop watching porn! __________________ please report me to the IRS and get reward

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Turner Members Join Date: Dec 2002 Posts: 101	Mike, number one is the better of the two but I do like the end of the second one... __________________ "His name is Turner, be on the lookout. He is talented and very reasonable." - MikeAI http://onemillionpixels.com

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cj Members Want to see your own Advertising Here! Join Date: Oct 2002 Location: Down Under Posts: 5,202	i prefer the first one, as the theme makes more sense - but the end of the second one is really cool ... "man these californian girls are easy"

07-30-2003	#3
Sword Members Join Date: Oct 2002 Posts: 208	I like the second one better personally. Just my 2 cents. Nice site concept!

07-30-2003	#7
Anthony Banned The global leader in pay-per-view AEBN Join Date: Oct 2002 Location: Florida Posts: 3,246	I liked them both. The latter definately has more detail, which the surfer might like. Buff had too miuch fun making it!

07-30-2003	#8
Menace Members Join Date: Oct 2002 Location: New England Posts: 161	#2 - it's more targeted.. Shows more of the girl and action. #1 should be run on the food network why the girls gone wild music tho?

07-30-2003	#10
Timon Hospitality Supervisor Join Date: Oct 2002 Posts: 2,338	If you're doing the reality porn thing you should focus more on the point in the video that shows the transition from shy virgin to a greedy cum slurping whore... It's that tension of "I am going to fuck you" vs. "No way I would do something like that" what sells memberships on a reality site. I think that confrontation is missing in your trailers... Last edited by Timon at Jul 30 2003, 08:44 AM

07-30-2003	#12
shawcutie Guests Join Date: Feb 2003 Posts: 210	LOL I like the first trailer. OMG did he say, "the best canoli in california"? BTW the fruit tart looked damn good!!

07-30-2003	#18
DerekM Members I'm new! Join Date: Jan 2003 Posts: 2	I like Trailer # 2. Anyway you can raise the volume?!?.. she talks too softly and it was hard to hear what she said. Other than that, it was good...

07-30-2003	#21
DAMNMAN Members Join Date: Nov 2002 Posts: 246	Out of these two clips I would have to say #1. But take the suggestions given so far seriously because the girls build up in #2 and the end of #2 are better than #1 as previously stated. The guy talkin' in #1 has more impact that's it. __________________ EXCLUSIVE ZMASTER REALITY VIDEOS Phone 561-964-8883 " Prepare yourself for the most impure tale ever to spring from the mind of man!"

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Hell Puppy Fat Fucking Nobody Want to see your own Advertising Here! Join Date: Oct 2002 Posts: 6,523	Just for a quick gut reaction without trying to analyze it, i prefer #2. Both are good though.

07-31-2003	#23
sextoyking 3 1/2 More Years... Join Date: Oct 2002 Location: Portland, OR. Posts: 1,523	Mike, I like both, but #2 seems to catch me a little more good job !! __________________ Huge Online Design Portfolio at Webinc.com http://www.webinc.com -------------------------------------- 50% Commissions on All Sales! http://www.wishing.com/money

07-31-2003	#24
confucy Members Join Date: Oct 2002 Posts: 1,066	I vote for #1 and the chocolate cream puff with vanilla pudding.

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