http://hirise.biz/alpha/trailer126t1.wmv

http://hirise.biz/alpha/trailer126t2.wmv

i prefer the first one, as the theme makes more sense - but the end of the second one is really cool ...

"man these californian girls are easy" :biglaugh:

I like the second one better personally. Just my 2 cents.

Nice site concept!

:okthumb:

That is the problem I am getting.... its hard to choose, what trailers will convert the best. #1 is best for story line, #2 is probably best for action...

I need to get a good balance I guess...

I like # 1

i like white chocolate extacy :D

I liked them both. The latter definately has more detail, which the surfer might like.

Buff had too miuch fun making it!

#2 - it's more targeted.. Shows more of the girl and action.

#1 should be run on the food network :awinky:

why the girls gone wild music tho?

It is music I bought, and liscensed.... It sounded familiar so I am using it. It is catchy....

If you're doing the reality porn thing you should focus more on the point in the video that shows the transition from shy virgin to a greedy cum slurping whore...

It's that tension of "I am going to fuck you" vs. "No way I would do something like that" what sells memberships on a reality site.

I think that confrontation is missing in your trailers...



Last edited by Timon at Jul 30 2003, 08:44 AM

Timon, I agree with you.... but ChatRoomRomeo is more of a, I will tell you what you want to hear, then you fuck me.... in some scenes we have confrontation, others we have the girl being the agressor.

We set up scenes with background on what went online, etc... its hard to sum it all up in a 30-45 second trailer.

So far sales have been pretty solid, 1 in 112 with our traffic, 1 in 248 overall...

I will work on your ideas though.... have to keep on improving!

LOL
I like the first trailer. OMG did he say, "the best canoli in california"?
BTW the fruit tart looked damn good!!

BTW The first one is the best IMHO... better build up to the action.

I'd just like to see Buff make the move on her ;-)

Shawcutie, stop watching porn!

brad that might help her get in the "mood" :nyanya:


Mike, I like the 1st one myself. looking forward to seeing you and the crew in a day or so :rokk:



Last edited by dantheman at Jul 30 2003, 11:33 AM

What do you think they took me to California for... to cook !!

Babe, I do it all morning while Mr. Shaw is still snoring :bdance:

I like Trailer # 2. Anyway you can raise the volume?!?.. she talks too softly and it was hard to hear what she said. Other than that, it was good...

I agree

Mike, number one is the better of the two but I do like the end of the second one...

:rokk:

Out of these two clips I would have to say #1.

But take the suggestions given so far seriously because the girls build up in #2 and the end of #2 are better than #1 as previously stated.

The guy talkin' in #1 has more impact that's it. :bulb2:

Just for a quick gut reaction without trying to analyze it, i prefer #2.

Both are good though.

Mike,

I like both, but #2 seems to catch me a little more :)

good job !!

I vote for #1 and the chocolate cream puff with vanilla pudding. :bjump:

#2

I came here thinkingyou were talking about mobile homes... :biglaugh: