tell me what you think ...

[DragonKing]

It's a bit out of line in IE. Also a bit plain and way too much content.
Who is running your program for you?

Sweety, your video clips are all XXX. They are fabulous and I think your a great
product, very sell able but not the way your doing it.

Why buy the cow when you can jerk off to it for free?

Hope you take this as it's meant. Helpful criticism.
If you'd like some more advice or someone to help you run your program and make you money,
drop me a line ...
ticodragonfly@gmail.com

[Hammer]

Good grief DragonKing, could you be a little less subtle?

Apparently the two guys above me are premees because I don't consider a 20 second video giving anything away.

She also asked for comments on her blog not her pay site and I don't see a problem with the blog as far as the amount of free content. IMO, there isn't enough content on the blog. I would suggest throwing in a link to a gallery once in a while. I would also suggest making the blog more personal. Right now it looks too much like you're just trying to sell memberships. If you are looking for a lot of traffic you need to give away a lot more content but that won't convert well. If you want quality traffic that will return to your blog to do more than to jerk off to free content then you need to add a lot more substance and by substance I don't mean more pictures, I mean more talking.

And what is the deal with all those links in your sidebar? Is your goal to use this blog to generate interest and traffic to your pay site or to feed traffic to a bunch of TGPs that you don't make any money from? If you want to trade traffic there are smart ways to do it with a blog but you sure don't want to do it like the TGPs do.

I also see some alignment issues in Firefox.

[gonzo]

Originally Posted by Hammer

Apparently the two guys above me are premees because I don't consider a 20 second video giving anything away.

She also asked for comments on her blog not her pay site and I don't see a problem with the blog as far as the amount of free content. IMO, there isn't enough content on the blog. I would suggest throwing in a link to a gallery once in a while. I would also suggest making the blog more personal. Right now it looks too much like you're just trying to sell memberships. If you are looking for a lot of traffic you need to give away a lot more content but that won't convert well. If you want quality traffic that will return to your blog to do more than to jerk off to free content then you need to add a lot more substance and by substance I don't mean more pictures, I mean more talking.

And what is the deal with all those links in your sidebar? Is your goal to use this blog to generate interest and traffic to your pay site or to feed traffic to a bunch of TGPs that you don't make any money from? If you want to trade traffic there are smart ways to do it with a blog but you sure don't want to do it like the TGPs do.

I also see some alignment issues in Firefox.

I think she needs some help

[Hammer]

Originally Posted by gonzo

I think she needs some help

ummm... isn't that what I'm trying to offer or are you suggesting that she pay DragonKing?

Maybe suggesting that she should have posted this on the Newbie forum would be helfpul.

[Toby]

Based on posts I've seen made at several forums, I'd call this thread a reasonably creative form of

That creativity would be far more productive redirected into the blog and the paysite tour.

[gonzo]

Originally Posted by Hammer

ummm... isn't that what I'm trying to offer or are you suggesting that she pay DragonKing?

Maybe suggesting that she should have posted this on the Newbie forum would be helfpul.

She could do a lot worse than hire Dragon King.
Lets face it. My Flashcash checks certainly were a lot bigger when he was running the show with those brilliant one page tours.

The proof was in the numbers and those things converted like crazy. Nothing else has ever come close.

If I had a program Dragon King would be at the TIP TOP of my list to hire for marketing. Im not talking affiliate rep. Im talking true marketing.

But then again what do you expect from the guy that created Netpond to begin with?

[DragonKing]

Hammer,
or may I call you Captain SaveAHo. I said two constructive lines to someone who asked for advice. You go on to throw me under the bus and write two paragraphs to the chick.
Maybe now you have a shot at her!

I'm also not known for my subtlety or longevity im guessing now as well..

[Hammer]

Originally Posted by DragonKing

Hammer,
or may I call you Captain SaveAHo. I said two constructive lines to someone who asked for advice. You go on to throw me under the bus and write two paragraphs to the chick.
Maybe now you have a shot at her!

I'm also not known for my subtlety or longevity im guessing now as well..

LOL. I wasnt' talking about your constructive advice which I'm sure she will appreciate. I also offered some advice and I'm sure others will as well, however, I didn't suggest that she hire me.