Fresh Eyes needed - DESIGN CRITIQUE

selena · 02-09-2006

I'm not big on the design, though I really can't lay a finger on why.

As for the actual ads, I'd suggest several more shots of each car.

nastyboy · 02-10-2006

Hey bud! The design looks pretty good to me..and you know how design is..you ask 100 people and get 100 opinions. The only suggestion I might offer up is this: Either in the design or the text make it STUPID clear what the service / product is. you mentioned " it is a UK based business that imports cars into the UK from the USA"

Honestly I struggled to determine that at first glance...just my 2 cents.

and...what keywords is he trying to rank for and how is he ranking for those keywords?

02-09-2006	#1
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02-10-2006	#2
nastyboy Approving Gay AVS Sites Join Date: Jan 2006 Location: Raleigh, NC Posts: 54	Re: Fresh Eyes needed - DESIGN CRITIQUE Hey bud! The design looks pretty good to me..and you know how design is..you ask 100 people and get 100 opinions. The only suggestion I might offer up is this: Either in the design or the text make it STUPID clear what the service / product is. you mentioned " it is a UK based business that imports cars into the UK from the USA" Honestly I struggled to determine that at first glance...just my 2 cents. and...what keywords is he trying to rank for and how is he ranking for those keywords? __________________ Naked Rhino Presents

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