More constructive feedback requested

gonzo · 07-12-2005

The Fat Fucking Designer has been after it once again and I think hes truned out yet another beauty. This tour was easy enough for me to send design specs to the FFD as I dropped off a dozen cheese Krystals and 3 chili cheese pups.

Im interested in seeing what yall think as well.

http://www.gonzofilms.com/depraveddollars/...trash/tour1.htm
http://www.gonzofilms.com/depraveddollars/...trash/tour2.htm
http://www.gonzofilms.com/depraveddollars/...rtrash/join.htm

The new tour for WhorebaitHals.com is in place and converting traffic very nicely according to my tests.So if you were considering sending depraveddollars traffic now is the time as the new tour addresses leak issues that were expressed prior.
http://www.whorebaithals.com/tour1/tour1.htm

Ill be taking the FFD some fried cheeseburgers for dinner so any feedback yall give would be most appreciated so I can get them in before he passes out [and his neighbors from the gas] for the evening.

If your not sending us your traffic....you should. This shit is as real as it gets and it retains. We have sites for all straight niches AND softcore banners going in place starting today.

Newton · 07-12-2005

Tour 1 and 2, don't like the header, the images dont work that well with the models. Tour 3 header is better and all the footers are cool.

There is no 'E' in any of the Horny's peppered around the tours.

"The souths nastiest sluts and horney house wives! over 15000 hardcore pics and videos inside the members!!!" ... The members have these inserted inside them or do you mean inside the members area?

The text still doesnt gel and it is littered with spelling mistakes like "creame"

Apart from those comments .. quite nice

Jace · 07-12-2005

jesus dude, what trailer park do you find these girls at?? i am suprised they have teeth!

TheEnforcer · 07-12-2005

I actually like the header for the tours that Newton doesn't like. LOL

Also, while soem of the text needs to be a bit clearer and such as he mentioned you also don't want it too polished because of the theme of the site.

gonzo · 07-12-2005

Quote:

Originally posted by TheEnforcer@Jul 12 2005, 10:27 AM
I actually like the header for the tours that Newton doesn't like. LOL

Also, while soem of the text needs to be a bit clearer and such as he mentioned you also don't want it too polished because of the theme of the site.

Thanks guys....
DOS TIP

Never feed a designer while hes working!

Dravyk · 07-12-2005

Overall I like ...

Only thing seemed totally out of place was the "last set".

Underneath it says: "Added: May 20, 2005. Story: Ok, ok...I KNOW this isn't Florida on these pics but rather from a little fuck filled vacation and a few slut natives, but it DOES remind me of Florida because of her tanned body and pussy! I think you'll really like these and I am sooooooooo excited about our upcoming move to the SUNSHINE STATE!...Felicia"

So if the "tour" itself is admitting it don't belong there, then what is it doing there??? Again, my only complaint.

Oh one more thing. Being the last set before the join page, the last thing seen prior to the join, do you really want to make the surfer go "huh?" right before he's about to click for a sale? I don't think that's a good idea. So, if you're going to have an anomaly, that's the worse place it could possibly be. I'd just eliminate the anomaly all together.

Overall, very nice concept. And I assumed the mispellings had been on purpose. If not, it goes with the site.

Trev · 07-12-2005

I can't find anything that hasn't already been picked up, the FFD does top shelf work.

aeon · 07-12-2005

Sweet shit - I don't know which bar that proudly boasts they have PBR on tap you had to wade through to find those whores but it definately looks "authentic".

#1 should be a winner. #2 sucks. You have images with URL's to other sites and too much emphasis on the jigg. Trailer trash = white sluts.

#3 just sucks overall.

gonzo · 07-14-2005

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Originally posted by aeon@Jul 12 2005, 03:01 PM
Sweet shit - I don't know which bar that proudly boasts they have PBR on tap you had to wade through to find those whores but it definately looks "authentic".

#1 should be a winner. #2 sucks. You have images with URL's to other sites and too much emphasis on the jigg. Trailer trash = white sluts.

#3 just sucks overall.

This is the funniest and most honest feedback yet!

07-12-2005	#6
Dravyk Easy Like Sunday Morning Want to see your own Advertising Here! Join Date: Oct 2002 Location: Behind a couch, somewhere in Philly Posts: 7,628	Overall I like ... Only thing seemed totally out of place was the "last set". Underneath it says: "Added: May 20, 2005. Story: Ok, ok...I KNOW this isn't Florida on these pics but rather from a little fuck filled vacation and a few slut natives, but it DOES remind me of Florida because of her tanned body and pussy! I think you'll really like these and I am sooooooooo excited about our upcoming move to the SUNSHINE STATE!...Felicia" So if the "tour" itself is admitting it don't belong there, then what is it doing there??? Again, my only complaint. Oh one more thing. Being the last set before the join page, the last thing seen prior to the join, do you really want to make the surfer go "huh?" right before he's about to click for a sale? I don't think that's a good idea. So, if you're going to have an anomaly, that's the worse place it could possibly be. I'd just eliminate the anomaly all together. Overall, very nice concept. And I assumed the mispellings had been on purpose. If not, it goes with the site. __________________ All Of 'Em Mainstream Webmasters New: WebmasterConventions.com

07-12-2005	#7
Trev Cunty Want to see your own Advertising Here! Join Date: Jan 2003 Posts: 10,150	I can't find anything that hasn't already been picked up, the FFD does top shelf work. __________________ Sucks to be you.

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07-12-2005	#1
gonzo Fat Fucking Nobody Want to see your own Advertising Here! Join Date: Apr 2003 Location: Atlanta,Ga. Posts: 17,795 Blog Entries: 11	The Fat Fucking Designer has been after it once again and I think hes truned out yet another beauty. This tour was easy enough for me to send design specs to the FFD as I dropped off a dozen cheese Krystals and 3 chili cheese pups. Im interested in seeing what yall think as well. http://www.gonzofilms.com/depraveddollars/...trash/tour1.htm http://www.gonzofilms.com/depraveddollars/...trash/tour2.htm http://www.gonzofilms.com/depraveddollars/...rtrash/join.htm The new tour for WhorebaitHals.com is in place and converting traffic very nicely according to my tests.So if you were considering sending depraveddollars traffic now is the time as the new tour addresses leak issues that were expressed prior. http://www.whorebaithals.com/tour1/tour1.htm Ill be taking the FFD some fried cheeseburgers for dinner so any feedback yall give would be most appreciated so I can get them in before he passes out [and his neighbors from the gas] for the evening. If your not sending us your traffic....you should. This shit is as real as it gets and it retains. We have sites for all straight niches AND softcore banners going in place starting today. __________________ We are putting the bastards of this world on notice; greed and corruption will always be met with "a voice made of ink and rage." "Never try and be like anyone else" - Hunter S. Thompson "The truth is the truth no matter how you try and package a lie" - Shellee Hale

07-12-2005	#2
Newton It's always business, never personal! The POWER of radio Oprano Radio Join Date: Aug 2004 Location: On a golf course Posts: 4,916	Tour 1 and 2, don't like the header, the images dont work that well with the models. Tour 3 header is better and all the footers are cool. There is no 'E' in any of the Horny's peppered around the tours. "The souths nastiest sluts and horney house wives! over 15000 hardcore pics and videos inside the members!!!" ... The members have these inserted inside them or do you mean inside the members area? The text still doesnt gel and it is littered with spelling mistakes like "creame" Apart from those comments .. quite nice __________________ Poser Bush in a mix-up over his hi-tech gizmo - ICLOD

07-12-2005	#3
Jace .... $100 for every ImLive sign-up Join Date: Mar 2004 Posts: 4,392 Blog Entries: 1	jesus dude, what trailer park do you find these girls at?? i am suprised they have teeth!

07-12-2005	#4
TheEnforcer Scored VIP to Anton's Piss Tank Want to see your own Advertising Here! Join Date: Oct 2002 Posts: 8,781	I actually like the header for the tours that Newton doesn't like. LOL Also, while soem of the text needs to be a bit clearer and such as he mentioned you also don't want it too polished because of the theme of the site.

07-12-2005	#8
aeon Banned Join Date: Dec 2002 Posts: 906	Sweet shit - I don't know which bar that proudly boasts they have PBR on tap you had to wade through to find those whores but it definately looks "authentic". #1 should be a winner. #2 sucks. You have images with URL's to other sites and too much emphasis on the jigg. Trailer trash = white sluts. #3 just sucks overall.