View Single Post
Old 02-06-2008   #2
miz_wright
Head CheeseMonger
 
miz_wright's Avatar
 
Join Date: Aug 2007
Posts: 1,069
Default Re: Adult Blog Writing Services; Feedback appreciated

I second Toby - I've found a few mis-spelt words:

-- Sample of my Work - Harcore,
-- in the teen sample: "then slips of those sexy little girl panties..."
-- and in your initial pitch, you've got "Unforuntately."

Which is...

Unfortunate.
__________________
Sales Babe and General Nerd

Be different; get it Wright
Wright Stuff Consulting

Hit me on ICQ at 353902844 or email me at liz (at) wrightstuffconsulting (dot) com
miz_wright is offline   Reply With Quote