There is nothing remarkable about your tour. It looks like many, many other paysites.
While it pains me to admit it
, pushpills gave some pretty good advice.
The angel and devil thing might work if you push the theme on one page with some very creative graphics and text, but it's such a common theme (maybe not in porn, but overall) that it will take some doing to make it stand out.
I don't think it works very well as it is now, as others have told you.
Making it stand out is your other problem. The person in the pictures on your site is an attractive person. There are thousands of attractive persons appearing on porn sites. There are probably hundreds of attractive persons trying to run their own porn sites.
Whoever is selling the person depicted on the pictures is going to need something that makes this site stand out from them. So far, I don't see that, and neither has most of the board.