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Originally Posted by pushpills
You're hot as hell, I don't care for the tour at all. Looks like an avs preview. Yell at me all day long if you like, but I wouldn't promote it as is. If you're not going to give away anything too graphic, then you must make the surfer "love you". It doesn't do it. Needs some softcore video teaser with a tad (3 seconds) of hardcore at the end, some fullsize pics, etc. That site does not want to make me want to buy a membership and I've seen it all. Hell, your snow pic makes me want to buy a membership alone....
The surfer isn't in love with you with that tour. They've just seen that you're hot.
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I agree.
Also I don't think you can't "carry" the sweet innocent bit....
That usually works better with blondes...
Of courrse , you could blonde up for the "angel" bit..
and borrow yr room mates red wig for the devil bit...
You could actually sell it as twin sisters that hate each other and are really unalike and at each others throat...boyfriend stealing etc etc....
so many angles that could be worked on...the site lack imagination.