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Old 07-12-2005   #6
Dravyk
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Overall I like ...

Only thing seemed totally out of place was the "last set".

Underneath it says: "Added: May 20, 2005. Story: Ok, ok...I KNOW this isn't Florida on these pics but rather from a little fuck filled vacation and a few slut natives, but it DOES remind me of Florida because of her tanned body and pussy! I think you'll really like these and I am sooooooooo excited about our upcoming move to the SUNSHINE STATE!...Felicia"

So if the "tour" itself is admitting it don't belong there, then what is it doing there??? Again, my only complaint.

Oh one more thing. Being the last set before the join page, the last thing seen prior to the join, do you really want to make the surfer go "huh?" right before he's about to click for a sale? I don't think that's a good idea. So, if you're going to have an anomaly, that's the worse place it could possibly be. I'd just eliminate the anomaly all together.

Overall, very nice concept. And I assumed the mispellings had been on purpose. If not, it goes with the site.
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