Ok, fuck, Iwent and did the warning page critique anyway
Haven't done one in a while
here is what I see on the warning page that needs to change:
Warning Page:
Switch out the hardcore banner for a softcore banner
Flip flop the title and the top ad. Put the ad in their face when the page loads.
Put the text around the banner instead of just below it.
Make the text a light color up against the dark blue background. White, Yellow, whatever, make it so they can read it.
Reduce the amount of space around the title. Blank space is often wasted space.
The recips need to be moved somewhere below the EXIT link and above the ENTER link.
So, first of all get the recips out of your way. Expand your warning text to a wider shorter box. Put the EXIT link directly below the Warning Box.
After the exit link, table out your recip links.
(I would go Exit link, then an ad, then the recip table, but thats just me)
Below the recip link, put your enter link. or an ad and then your enter link.
Make them look for that fucking link. Thats what should be in black on the dark blue background.
draw their attention to the sponsors, not the free porn.
Bottom ad. Link all of that text, not just the CLICK HERE part.
Put mouseover code on both of your ads and on the exit link to hide your referral ids. People are more likely to click on something that says
http://www.mysponsor.com
then they are to click on something that says
http://www.mysponsor.com?affid=1256%&^%90&ref=23jj67
That looks like some sort of virus code to a user.
I would definitely have 3 ads on the warning pages. I have pretty much used 3 on the warning page on just about every free site I ever built (if I didn't do 3 it was because I wanted an extra outbound link for something else). I have never had any kind of rejection problem on my sites.
If this is truly your first site, then it is a good start ! But it needs work before it is ready to be submitted anywhere imho.