I know you said its a draft, but the scrolling text needs to stand out more.
And you have no offclicks at the top of the page.
You want the surfer off the gallery before the pictures even load. Maybe link the scrolling text. or a text link 'see all our sex world records now' something like that.
Will the tour offer any free vids or anything like that?
A 'click here to see the free video on the tour' works wonders at the top of a gallery.
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