I like #1 if the bit with the Buff joking about the first costume was cut out
#2 would be better if the few frames that show her back tattoo were cut out
1 & 2 both have the female model saying "How much she wants the job" which plays well
Actually the female model plays the part pretty well
Now to be devils advocate
How much market research was done before going with this angle?
Am asking as I'm not sure the market for rap is the same as the market that buys porn
Look at your members demographics and if they are skewed older (30+ years of age, Male, US citizens) maybe a dancer for a new band's (but not rap) video might play as a better story line
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